The models from Week 5 on

Week5 

The very first sketch model I made, which was able to deliever the form of the room and spatial qualities. 

Week 6

The process of making the second model

Building the loft bedroom

The slanting wall under the loft creating different spaces

The upper floor with railing and the wall underneath

The shot towards the interior from the door

From this view, how the sun light gets into the room through the big window can be seen.

Open the interior

The view from the above.

 Using Fusion 360 to create the object with my intitials.

The section analysis of the model (M, E, Z)

The white enamel and oak wood are chosen as materials to be used in this object.

(rendered model)

Week 7

Second model photography 

The human figure and the shadow form the columns

The skylight (right one) and the canopy (left) 

The side door that is open towards the exterioe

The shot from the side door to the interior space.

Some shots during making the third model

Some sketches 

First draft of 100 Word statement

The connection with the natural light remains reinforced by the presence of the view of the house framed by large windows lengthwise. Spaces that, without becoming dark, I believe should incorporate as much natural light as possible. The idea on the continuity in spaces minimizing divisions between the surroundings and the house has been built. The selected materials are concrete, wood, steel and vegetation, generating contrasts and harmonizing the space. The open space supported by columns continues without interruption integrating with the balcony and veranda.
Feedback:
Need topic sentence focus on one theme and a conclusion. And be specific.


Second Draft 

Lighting is a vital element to change the atmosphere of a space and the relationship with the environment. Natural light is of significance on the comfort, health and mood by making architectural more harmony between exterior and interior, nature and human. Spaces that, without becoming dark, I believe should incorporate as much natural light as possible. The connection with the natural light remains reinforced by the presence of the view of the house framed by large windows lengthwise. The idea on the continuity in spaces minimizing divisions between the surroundings and the house has been gradually achieved by creating more interactions with the exterior and the natural light.

Feedback:

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 In your topic sentence describe why natural light is important

Add a topic sentence – As we just spoke about with your work, lighting could be useful to change the atmosphere of a room.

This could be your topic sentence then move into your supporting sentences highlighted in yellow.

Third draft statement

Natural lighting is a vital element to change the atmosphere of a space and stronger relationship with the environment through the significant impact on the comfort, health and mood by harmonising a space. To stop spaces becoming dark and unwelcoming, incorporating as much natural light as possible, is key to a comfortable space. In model A the connection with natural light remains reinforced by large window and skylight increasing mood. The idea on the continuity in spaces seen in model B minimising divisions between environment and the house has been gradually achieved by creating more interactions with the exterior and the natural light which changes the atmosphere from unwelcoming to inviting. Thus, natural lighting could direct the atmosphere of spaces.

100 word statement

Natural lighting is a vital element to change the atmosphere of a space. It creates a stronger relationship with the environment through harmonising a space, which has a significant impact on residents’ comfort, health and mood. To stop spaces becoming dark and unwelcoming, incorporating as much natural light as possible, is key. In model A the interiors’ connection with natural light is enabled by the large window and skylight, increasing mood. The continuity of spaces seen in model B, minimises division between environment and the house, which was gradually achieved by maximising interactions with the interior and natural light. This changes the atmosphere from unwelcoming to inviting. Here we see the possibility for natural light to direct atmosphere in spaces.